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|chapter = 13
 
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|author = CaptFredricks
 
|author = CaptFredricks
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|written = [[July]] - [[October]] [[2015]]
 
|written = [[July]] - [[October]] [[2015]]
 
|published = [[12 October]] [[2015]]
 
|published = [[12 October]] [[2015]]
|date = [[Stardate 83446.1]] ([[20 May]] [[2409]])
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|date = [[20 May]] [[2409]] ({{sd|83446.1}})
 
|prev = {{c|Task Force Hippocrates|chapter}}
 
|prev = {{c|Task Force Hippocrates|chapter}}
 
|next = {{c|What Lies Beneath}}
 
|next = {{c|What Lies Beneath}}
 
|arc_primary = Spectres
 
|arc_primary = Spectres
 
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:"'''Skirmish'''" is the thirteenth chapter of the {{vol|FED|1}} of {{story|5}}, written between [[July]] and [[October]] [[2015]] and published on [[12 October]] 2015 by {{u|CaptFredricks}}.
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"'''Skirmish'''" is the thirteenth chapter of the {{vol|FED|1}} of {{s|FED}}, written between [[July]] and [[October]] [[2015]] and published on [[12 October]] 2015. It is authored by {{u|CaptFredricks}}.
   
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;Summary
Two months after the events at {{STO|Celes_System|Celes}} and the {{MA|Briar Patch}}, the crew of the {{USS|Leviathan|NCC-93151}} is sent to the {{MB|Donatu system}} to discover why the [[True Way Alliance]] has been spotted there.
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:Two months after the events at [[Celes system|Celes]] and the [[Briar Patch]], the crew of the {{USS|Leviathan|NCC-93151}} is sent to the [[Donatu system]] to discover why the [[True Way Alliance]] has been spotted there.
   
 
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Synopsis = <!-- a brief description of the story -->
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=== Teaser ===
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[[Jason Fredricks]] sits in his {{MA|ready room}}, nearly asleep, but [[Lenerea Mendel]] informs him that he's receiving a private message from an unknown source. This forces him to wake up fully. On the other end of the transmission is an operative in [[Section 31]], a covert agency of the [[United Federation of Planets|Federation]], named [[Franklin Drake]].
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Drake tells him to report to the [[Donatu system]] because strange things have been happening there, such as ships having environmental issues and personnel being drained of their neural energy. A secondary concern is [[Cardassian]]s working for the [[True Way]] having a presence in the area. Jason agrees to the mission, but he asks Drake to send a request to [[Fleet Admiral]] [[Jorel Quinn]] for a pardon of [[Elisa Flores]], who assisted in a brief takeover of the {{USS|Leviathan|NCC-93151}} by a [[Romulan]] agent named [[Jarek Davis]].
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Drake agrees, but he reminds Jason to keep all of the information shared between them confidential. Jason then orders a cup of {{MA|coffee}} and walks onto the {{MA|bridge}}. He tells his crew the only thing he can tell them: their destination. Before they go to Donatu, however, he tells [[Ernie Hauser]] to take them to [[Earth]] so they can retrieve Elisa.
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=== Act I: Flores ===
 
{{!}}-{{!}}
 
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References =
 
References =
 
=== Characters ===
 
=== Characters ===
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{{scrollbox|content=
:[[Dylyp Azeli]] &bull; [[Julia Cromwell]] &bull; [[Franklin Drake]] &bull; [[Elisa Flores]] &bull; [[Jason Fredricks]] &bull; [[Hannah Freeman]] &bull; [[Ernie Hauser]] &bull; [[Tala Jones]] &bull; [[Kardok]] &bull; [[Lenerea Mendel]] &bull; [[Th'vol Olethla]] &bull; [[Lucas Wells]]
 
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#[[Jason Fredricks]] {{teaser}}
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#[[Lenerea Mendel]]
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#[[Franklin Drake]]
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#[[Tala Jones]]
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#[[Ernie Hauser]]
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#[[Elisa Flores]] {{a1}}
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#[[Walter Bozeman]]
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#[[Dylyp Azeli]]
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#[[Th'vol Olethla]]
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#[[Julia Cromwell]]
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#[[Lucas Wells]]
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#[[Hannah Freeman]]
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#[[Kardok]] {{a2|not by name}}
   
=== Starships ===
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==== Referenced only ====
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#[[Madred]] {{teaser}}
:''[[Axon]]'' &bull; {{USS|Leviathan|NCC-93151}} &bull; {{IKS|SuvwI'}}
 
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#[[Jorel Quinn]]
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#[[Jarek Davis]]
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#[[Vance L'eher]] {{a1}}
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#[[B'vat]] {{a2}}
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#[[Jeff Philips]]
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#[[Charlie Morgan]] {{a3}}
   
=== Locations ===
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==== Unnamed ====
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*[[Unnamed True Way personnel]]
:{{STO|Argelius_System|Argelius system}} &bull; {{MB|Donatu system}} &bull; {{MA|New Zealand}} ([[Earth]]) &bull; [[New Zealand Penal Settlement]]
 
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== References ==
 
=== Characters ===
 
:[[B'vat]] &bull; [[Jarek Davis]] &bull; [[Madred]] &bull; [[Jeff Philips]] &bull; [[Jorel Quinn]]
 
   
 
=== Starships ===
 
=== Starships ===
:{{USS|Enterprise|NCC-1701-D|-D}}
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#{{USS|Leviathan|NCC-93151}} {{teaser}}
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#''[[Axon]]'' {{a2}}
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#{{IKS|SuvwI'}}
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==== Referenced only ====
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#{{USS|Enterprise|NCC-1701-D|-D}} {{a3}}
   
 
=== Locations ===
 
=== Locations ===
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#[[New Zealand Penal Settlement]] {{a1}}
:[[Cardassia Prime]] &bull; [[Starfleet Academy]]
 
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#[[New Zealand]], [[Earth]]
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#[[Donatu system]] {{a2}}
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==== Referenced only ====
 
#[[Cardassia Prime]] {{teaser}}
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#[[Argelius system]]
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#[[Starfleet Academy]] {{a2}}
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#{{d|Vulcan|planet}} {{a3}}
   
 
=== Other references ===
 
=== Other references ===
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:[[2368]] &bull; {{MA|bridge}} &bull; [[Cardassian]] &bull; {{MA|Department of Temporal Investigations}} &bull; [[Devidian]] &bull; {{MA|Federation-Klingon border}} &bull; [[Klingon]] &bull; {{MA|Klingon Bird-of-Prey}} &bull; {{MA|PADD}} &bull; {{MA|phaser}} &bull; {{MA|photon torpedo}} &bull; [[Section 31]] &bull; {{MA|sickbay}} &bull; [[Starfleet]] &bull; {{MA|tricorder}} &bull; {{MA|triolic wave}} &bull; [[True Way Alliance]] &bull; {{MA|turbolift}} &bull; [[United Federation of Planets]]
 
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==== Governments and organizations ====
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*[[Cardassian Guard]]
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*{{MA|Department of Temporal Investigations}}
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*[[Klingon Defense Force]]
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*[[Klingon Empire]]
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*[[Section 31]]
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*[[Starfleet]]
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*[[True Way]]
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*[[United Federation of Planets]]
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==== Species ====
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*[[Cardassian]]
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*[[Devidian]]
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*[[Klingon]]
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==== Ranks ====
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*[[commander]]
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*[[ensign]]
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*[[fleet admiral]]
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*[[gul]]
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*[[lieutenant]]
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*[[lieutenant commander]]
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==== Miscellaneous ====
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*[[19th century]]
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*[[2368]]
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*{{MA|Federation-Klingon border}}
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*''[[jol yIchu']]''
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*{{MA|Klingon Bird-of-Prey}}
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*{{STO|Ophidian Cane}}
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*[[PADD]]
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*''[[Qapla']]''
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*[[stardate]]
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*{{MA|triolic wave}}
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{{!}}-{{!}}
 
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Appendices =
 
Appendices =
 
=== Log entries ===
 
=== Log entries ===
*[[Captain's log, USS Leviathan (NCC-93151), 2409#Mission to Donatu system|Captain's log, USS ''Leviathan'']]
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*[[Captain's log, USS Leviathan (NCC-93151)#Mission to Donatu system|Captain's log, USS ''Leviathan'']]
 
*[[Captain's log, Axon|Captain's log, ''Axon'']]
 
*[[Captain's log, Axon|Captain's log, ''Axon'']]
   
=== Memorable quotes ===
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==== Continuity ====
 
*The topic of [[Jason Fredricks]] and [[Lenerea Mendel]]'s relationship issues is brought up. ({{c|Researcher Rescue}})
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*References to [[Jarek Davis]] and Elisa Flores' part in aiding his takeover of the {{USS|Leviathan|NCC-93151}}. ({{c|War Is Good for Business}}, {{c|Treasure Trading Station|*}})
   
 
=== Background and trivia ===
 
=== Background and trivia ===
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*This chapter is an adaptation of the ''{{MA|Star Trek Online}}'' mission "{{STO|Mission: Skirmish}}".
*"Skirmish" begins the four-part arc {{arc|Spectres}}, which features the [[Devidian]]s as the main antagonists.
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*It begins the four-part arc {{arc|Spectres|*}}, which features the [[Devidian]]s as the main antagonists.
*It is the first chapter of ''Federation Legacy'' to be written in past tense; all previous chapters were originally written in present tense. {{u|CaptFredricks}} originally wanted to write in present tense to make the reader feel like (s)he was reading as the story was unfolding, but decided he liked writing in past tense better. All chapters since have been written in past tense.
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*It is the first chapter of ''Federation Legacy'' to be written in the past tense; all previous chapters were originally written in the present tense. {{u|CaptFredricks}} originally wanted to write in the present tense to make the reader feel like (s)he was reading as the story was unfolding, but decided he liked writing in the past tense better. All chapters since have been written in the past tense.
 
*This chapter introduces [[Franklin Drake]], a mysterious agent of [[Starfleet]]'s [[Section 31]], and features [[Elisa Flores]] as a more prominent character than before. It is also the first chapter of ''Federation Legacy'' to feature [[Kardok]], but he is not mentioned by name.
 
*This chapter introduces [[Franklin Drake]], a mysterious agent of [[Starfleet]]'s [[Section 31]], and features [[Elisa Flores]] as a more prominent character than before. It is also the first chapter of ''Federation Legacy'' to feature [[Kardok]], but he is not mentioned by name.
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*A [[2020]] revision of this chapter saw certain scenes extended, most notably in Act I when Drake brings Elisa to the {{USS|Leviathan}} and when certain ''Leviathan'' crew members receive promotions.
*References to previous chapters:
 
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**The first extended scene includes [[Ensign]] [[Walter Bozeman|Bozeman]], a {{MA|security officer}} who did not originally appear in this chapter. It also features more dialogue between Elisa and Drake.
**{{c|Researcher Rescue}} &ndash; the topic of [[Jason Fredricks]] and [[Lenerea Mendel]]'s relationship issues.
 
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**The second extended scene adds more dialogue between characters and changes the recipients of promotions. In the original version of the chapter, [[Tala Jones]] and [[Dylyp Azeli]] were promoted. Now, Dylyp, [[Julia Cromwell]], and [[Vance L'eher]] receive promotions instead (this change is because Tala is now promoted to [[lieutenant junior grade]] after the events of {{c|Line in the Sand}}, though this promotion happens off-screen).
**{{c|War Is Good for Business}}, {{c|Treasure Trading Station|chapter}} &ndash; references to [[Jarek Davis]] and Elisa Flores' part in aiding his takeover of the {{USS|Leviathan|NCC-93151}}.
 
 
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"Skirmish" is the thirteenth chapter of the first volume of Star Trek: Federation Legacy, written between July and October 2015 and published on 12 October 2015. It is authored by CaptFredricks.

Summary
Two months after the events at Celes and the Briar Patch, the crew of the USS Leviathan is sent to the Donatu system to discover why the True Way Alliance has been spotted there.

Teaser

Jason Fredricks sits in his ready room, nearly asleep, but Lenerea Mendel informs him that he's receiving a private message from an unknown source. This forces him to wake up fully. On the other end of the transmission is an operative in Section 31, a covert agency of the Federation, named Franklin Drake.

Drake tells him to report to the Donatu system because strange things have been happening there, such as ships having environmental issues and personnel being drained of their neural energy. A secondary concern is Cardassians working for the True Way having a presence in the area. Jason agrees to the mission, but he asks Drake to send a request to Fleet Admiral Jorel Quinn for a pardon of Elisa Flores, who assisted in a brief takeover of the USS Leviathan by a Romulan agent named Jarek Davis.

Drake agrees, but he reminds Jason to keep all of the information shared between them confidential. Jason then orders a cup of coffee and walks onto the bridge. He tells his crew the only thing he can tell them: their destination. Before they go to Donatu, however, he tells Ernie Hauser to take them to Earth so they can retrieve Elisa.

Act I: Flores

Log entries

Continuity

Background and trivia

  • This chapter is an adaptation of the Star Trek Online mission "Mission: Skirmish".
  • It begins the four-part arc Spectres (*), which features the Devidians as the main antagonists.
  • It is the first chapter of Federation Legacy to be written in the past tense; all previous chapters were originally written in the present tense. CaptFredricks originally wanted to write in the present tense to make the reader feel like (s)he was reading as the story was unfolding, but decided he liked writing in the past tense better. All chapters since have been written in the past tense.
  • This chapter introduces Franklin Drake, a mysterious agent of Starfleet's Section 31, and features Elisa Flores as a more prominent character than before. It is also the first chapter of Federation Legacy to feature Kardok, but he is not mentioned by name.
  • A 2020 revision of this chapter saw certain scenes extended, most notably in Act I when Drake brings Elisa to the USS Leviathan and when certain Leviathan crew members receive promotions.
    • The first extended scene includes Ensign Bozeman, a security officer who did not originally appear in this chapter. It also features more dialogue between Elisa and Drake.
    • The second extended scene adds more dialogue between characters and changes the recipients of promotions. In the original version of the chapter, Tala Jones and Dylyp Azeli were promoted. Now, Dylyp, Julia Cromwell, and Vance L'eher receive promotions instead (this change is because Tala is now promoted to lieutenant junior grade after the events of "Line in the Sand", though this promotion happens off-screen).

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